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Sunday, May 22, 2011

Agents

I sent my latest query letter to an agent and received a request for the first chapter of my first novel. Apparently the promise in my novels' synopses did not translate to a favorable evaluation by the agent. I was rejected for not having a good enough hook.

In discussing this with my editor, she said, "Don't be discouraged. It's a good book. I know you'll find a home for it!"

I reworked the first chapter of the first novel and sent it off to another agent.

Saturday, May 7, 2011

Writers Workshop

I attended a writers workshop today at the Hartford Public Library. Agent Jan Kardys presented an all-encompassing review of the publishing world from sending a query letter to agents through self-publishing as an option. I learned some new and interesting information and hopefully it will help me in my quest to become a published author.

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Query Letter Out

I mailed my query letter to an agent on Monday pitching the three completed novels in the Jim Buchanan Series. Now I have begun working on my fourth novel in the series, Secrets of the Bob Marshall Wilderness.

In this latest novel, the rumor of an abandoned gold and silver mine brings together a group of young friends in search of lost riches. However, greed, misplaced trust, a murder, an early winter storm, and a 19th century legend lead to their downfall. Jim risks his own life to find and save them, sort out the evidence, and pull all the pieces together.

Monday, May 2, 2011

Query Letters

Today I'm mailing my latest query letter. I met with an agent last year at a writers conference hosted by the Connecticut Authors & Publishers Association. She said I selected the right agent and offered positive feedback on 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' which I used to finalize that novel. With all three novels now professionally edited I am extending the courtesy of letting that agent review my novels before I query other agents.

Saturday, April 23, 2011

What I've been up to and future plans

I've written four short stories this year, have a couple in the rough draft stage, and a few more in the planning stages. At least one or two will be entered in writing contests.

I will be preparing query letters to send to agents by the end of this month for the novels 'Montana Harvest' and 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot'.

I am also working on the suggested changes for the professionally edited novel, 'The Killing Zone' and hope to have that completed before the end of May.

Friday, April 15, 2011

Unicorn Writers Conference

I attended the Unicorn Writers Conference where Carol Higgins Clark was the keynote speaker. I also met with an agent who provided me with feedback on my work. He complimented me on my dialogue saying that I present it in a natural and believable manner. Unfortunately, the conference planners did not hook me up with an agent who specializes in mystery/suspense novels. I met some very interesting people and listened to some terrific speakers and presenters.

Friday, March 25, 2011

The Killing Zone

With the professional edits of 'Montana Harvest' and 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' completed and both novels ready for publishing, I will begin completing the suggested professional edit on 'The Killing Zone.' This novel, the third in the series, currently stands at 104,180 words encompassing 400 pages. Again, like the first two novels, the size of this novel will be whittled down to a manageable level without sacrificing plot or style. What will go will be scenes, dialogue, and prose that either does nothing for the story, slows the action down, or is redundant. The professional edit will result in a tighter and more dramatic novel.

Thursday, March 24, 2011

Mystery at Little Bitterroot

I have completed making the professional edit changes to 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot'. This novel topped out at 73,882 words and 301 pages.

Here is a recap of the statistics for the fully completed novels in the Jim Buchanan Series:

Montana Harvest - 58,558 words, 247 pages

Mystery at Little Bitterroot - 73,882 words, 301 pages

I will now prepare Mystery at Little Bitterroot for presentation at the Unicorn Writers Conference in April and will bring along manuscripts for both novels.

Now I will work on final edits for my two short stories for my writing group's book project. Once that is completed in early April, I will begin work on the editoral changes for 'The Killing Zone.'

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Mystery at Little Bitterroot

My editing progress on 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' has resulted in reductions of total word count to 76,535 and total page count to 311. I have approximately 47 remaining pages to edit. I should have this novel completed and ready for publishing by the end of this week.

Friday, March 18, 2011

Editing progress on 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot'

I've completed the editorial suggestions on 162 pages of 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot.' This weekend I will make an extra effort to complete the remaining suggested corrections. The total pages of this novel currently stand at 331 and the word count is 83,449. Expect these totals to decrease as I near the finished product.

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Mystery at Little Bitterroot

I've begun making my editor's suggested changes to 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot'. I'm on page 95 of 342 pages. The total number of pages will shrink as I go forward with the edit as will the word count. It was originally over 92,000 words but now stands at 87,299. My aim is to finish this edit by the end of this month so that I can bring two completed manuscripts to the Unicorn Writers Conference in April.

Saturday, March 5, 2011

Mystery at Little Bitterroot

Today I will begin the process of making my editor's suggested changes to my manuscript of 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot'.

Final Edit Completed

I've finished making the changes to 'Montana Harvest' as suggested by my editor. The novel topped out at 58,559 words covering 248 pages. I've submitted the first 48 pages to the Unicorn Writers Conference for a one-to-one session with an agent. I will also begin the process of mailing query letters to agents.

Thursday, March 3, 2011

Progress on 'Montana Harvest'

I've completed my editor's suggested corrections on 187 of the 259 submitted pages of my final edit for 'Montana Harvest'. I plan to finish the remainder today and then will submit the first 40 pages by Saturday to the Unicorn Writers Conference for review by an agent. This writers conference is in April and if it proves not to be fruitful then I will send query letters to other agents. One way or another this first novel will be published this year and available for purchase.

New Short Story

I've completed a new short story for the book project with my writing group. The title of the story is 'In My Life' and it is a story of lost love with a Beatles twist. I still need to complete a final edit on this story as well as the prior story that I have written.

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Copyrighted Novels

I've registered 'Montana Harvest', 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot', and 'The Killing Zone' with the US Copyright Office. It was an easy process and for you fledgling authors out there it only costs $35 per novel.

Monday, January 17, 2011

The Lost Relics of Mount Quarantania

The title of this post is a short story that I wrote for my writing group. We plan to collect short stories from our members and submit them in book form for publication. Although I will not divulge my short story or describe what it is about in this blog, what I will say is that it is a story in the 'Dan Brown' mold (The da Vinci Code).

This group book will be an assortment of short stories and poems some of which I have read as a member of the writing group. I can honestly say that these stories will be both exceptional and entertaining. The individual members of the group are all talented writers. I expect that this group book will be published around mid-year. It will be available on Amazon.com and through bookstores as an on-demand order.

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Progress

I have sent 'Montana Harvest' to my editor and I've finished my short story which will be included in our writing group's book compilation. The title of my short story is 'The Lost Relics of Mount Quarantania'. I also plan to submit a few poems for consideration as well.

Sunday, December 19, 2010

Poems

One of the suggestions from my writing group for our book project next spring is to intersperse poems throughout the book. My editor and writing instructor, Eileen Albrizio introduced me to to three forms of poems, Triolet, Haiku, and Tanka. Without describing the poetic form in detail here are my examples of each:


TRIOLET

I stare at her crossing the room
and long for her when I'm alone
I see her face at the sound of a familiar tune
I stare at her crossing the room
I remember the day we met in June
and the hours we spoke on the telephone
I stare at her crossing the room
and long for her when I'm alone

© 2009 Felix F. Giordano


HAIKU

Snow falls
on mountain cliffs
feeding glacial melt

© 2009 Felix F. Giordano


TANKA

The dead of winter
when trees have shed their leaves
branches sway in the wind
reaching up to the sky
in praise of Creator

© 2009 Felix F. Giordano

Montana Harvest

Montana Harvest is complete! I finished a final edit on the novel yesterday and sent it to my editor for a professional edit. Two significant changes occurred in this novel (chronologically the first in the series) which will have a bearing on the next two novels in the series. I won't detail what the changes are but be assured that one has to do with a relationship and the other with a vocation and both are linked.

Sunday, December 12, 2010

Writing Group

On Thursday evening I met with three of my former writing class members to discuss the short story compilation that we intend to self-publish and our future writers group meetings set to begin in January.

Monday, November 29, 2010

Almost December

It's almost December. I've been remiss in posting lately. I can arrive at excuses such as family matters, home projects, illness, pet issues, etc. Actually, I've continued to work on a final edit of 'Montana Harvest' (when I can squeeze in the time) and have 183 of 229 completed pages. I'm on target to send the manuscript to my editor by the end of next weekend. I have high hopes for this novel and believe it will be a good read for those interested in a mystery/suspense thriller.

Thursday, November 11, 2010

BUSY, Busy, busy

I have been busy with many things and many issues too numerous to mention and have not posted in a while. The inspiration phrase for this week (found below the main picture on my blog) reminded me of why, since I retired, I try to spend time with my mother. It is the bond of life. It is why a tree drops its seed and why it grows into a sapling and then another adult tree. I often wonder what is in store for us ... when we leave this world. I haven't the answer and I hope it takes a long time to get there but I know it will be an experience to revel in. An opportunity to learn everything there is to know, to meet friends long since departed, and for us to decide upon the next step in our eternal journey.

Thursday, October 28, 2010

Passing

A friend and one of my writing classmates passed away this week. It is always difficult to experience the loss of someone but my friend was someone who clearly helped improve my writing. He was always willing to provide constructive criticism and point me in the right direction. Fred, you are missed but in your wonderful novels about the theater your voice continues and it is as strong as ever.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

The Lost Relics

Last month my MCC writing class and I took our teacher out for brunch at the Marlborough Tavern. One topic we discussed was for each student (there are ten of us) to submit a ten-page short story to be included in a self-published compilation. I have finished a draft of my short story and have sent it off to one of my classmates for critique. It's titled 'The Lost Relics' and is a story in the realm of a Dan Brown (Da Vinci Code, Angels & Demons) mystery. The plan is for all of us to have final edits of our short stories ready by January and then submit them to Booklocker.com. With this compilation and my three novels planned for publication, 2011 will prove to be an exciting year.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Amazon Kindle

Today I received my new Kindle 3G Wireless Reading Device. It works on the 3G network as well as WiFi. I downloaded Montana Harvest and using the speech to text function, I listened to the first eight chapters. Listening to my novel allows me not only to hear my writing out loud but it will also help me edit my work.

Friday, October 15, 2010

Tomorrow's Powwow

Tomorrow is the 17th annual Wolf Den Powwow in Pomfret, Connecticut. We are planning to attend early and enjoy our time there. I do plan to take pictures and will look for some Native American products (jewelery, prayer mix, sage, fry bread, buffalo burgers, etc.). Last year I purchased a prayer mix, some sage, and a beautiful, hand-made blanket. I am really looking forward to this.

I find that when I am at powwows, I feel most relaxed with the sounds and smells that embrace me there. I often look up at the sky and sense a smile from above guarding us all who are there. In Native American culture no symbol is more important than the circle.

From the shape of the bottom of a tipi, to the shape of a drum to the shape of a dream catcher, they all describe the endless boundary of existence. The meaning of the circle explains everything from the spheres of the sun, planets, and the moon to the circuits of the seasons, to even our own bodies' circulatory system. Everything must return from whence it came. It is the cycle of life and it is expressed most profoundly at a powwow where everything sacred can be found in the circle.

Monday, October 11, 2010

UPCOMING POWWOW

In the past, this is the best Powwow I have ever attended. There are over 25 vendors, plenty of buffalo burgers and fry bread, music, singing, and dancing for all.

Many of the products offered are authentic Native-made and are not cheap knock-offs that you may see passed off at other venues. Such things as smudge sticks, sage, prayer mixes, blankets, pipes, flutes, and jewelery, are of a very high quality and are hand-made.

If you wish to purchase Native-made products, this is the place to support the Native hands that made these wonderful items.

As Jim Buchanan's grandfather (Chief Soaring Eagle) once said, “Little Hawk, the beauty isn't in the beads on your neck, or the pipes we smoke, or the moccasins we wear; the beauty is in the hands that made them.”

October 16-17

Wolf Den 17th Annual Powwow, Wolf Den State Park, Jct Rte.44 & 101, Pomfret Ctr., CT 860-428-7271

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Montana Harvest

Last night I completed Montana Harvest. Today I printed my manuscript for a final review before I send it off to my editor. It settled out at 59,745 words on 222 double spaced pages and these will likely change after my own once-over and then my editor's suggestions. If everything plans out as expected I should have it ready for publishing in January.

Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Now you can turn your blog into a book!

What a great idea! Now for a relatively inexpensive price they can publish your blog in book format. One may ask, why? Well, to keep a record for posterity or to share with those friends or relatives of ours who don't have computers or Internet access. I think this is a wonderful option and I plan to take advantage of it.

Turn your blog into a book!
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Powwow this weekend!


Fourth Annual Intertribal Powwow
 September 18 & 19, 2010 

For 2010, Sweetwilliam Farm is proud to have Native Directions be a part of Fifth Annual Intertribal Powwow.  All proceeds will be going to this wonderful non-profit organization.  Please visit their website at
http://www.nativedirections.com
 

The weekend is filled with Native American Tradition; Drumming, Dancing, Singing, Regalia, Story Telling, Flute Playing, Food, Genuine Native Gifts & Craft Vendors, Traders. During the day there is a blanket dance, pumpkin dance for the kids, and other dances in which the general public may dance too!

This is open to the public.  Groups are are welcome.                      

Schedule (same for both days):10:00am = Vendors open for business
11:00am - noon = Native American Story Telling, Hoop Dancing, Flute Concert
noon ish = Grand Entry, traditional opening ceremony
2:00pm ish = drums take lunch; Native American Story Telling, Hoop Dancing, Flute Concert
4:00pm  (ish) Closing Ceremony
5:00pm - Vendors close for business

Details:

Saturday = 10am- 5pm
Sunday = 10am - 5pm
Parking = $5.00 per car
Please note, most vendors accept cash only, some do take credit cards...

The 2010 Powwow will be held at the store lot.  Please follow the posted signs to designated parking areas in the back of the farm.


2007 Powwow 

The Honor Guard is has joined us this for our 2007 Powwow. They are carrying with them one of the flags flown on the World Trade Center,when it destroyed 9-11-01.  There is a special ceremony during the grand entry honoring the flag. (around noon) The flag will then be on display for the rest of the day.  This is a fantastic honor for us at Sweetwilliam Farm!


Follow this link to view pictures from our 2007 powwow: http://www.flickr.com/photos/9357252@N02/sets/72157602680603474/

Brunch at the Marlborough Tavern

My former writing classmates and I took our teacher out to brunch at the Marborough Tavern on Sunday. It was so nice to see old friends some of who I haven't seen in almost two years. We made plans to form a writers group and also publish a compilation of short stories. When I attended the classes from 2004-2008 there was so much positive energy in our core group of writers and I felt that same energy on Sunday. Our teacher is amazing. He is so unassuming and supportive of each of us yet his accomplishments stand out for themselves. He is a retired college professor who headed the English Department at a US military academy, a Fulbright Scholar, and a writer who has worked for public TV, yet he still recognizes the creativity in his students and wants to see each of us succeed. I have been truly blessed to have met him and my classmates and wouldn't trade it for anything.

Friday, September 3, 2010

Billy Bob Walkabout

Sometimes a news story will affect you in a way that none have ever before. I'm sure that we were all affected by the tragedy of 911, the untimely death of Princess Diana, and the assassinations of RFK, MLK, and JFK. But have you ever read an obituary of one common individual who wasn't a political figure, a celebrity, or died as a result of a violent act but were still profoundly moved by the sheer magnitude of that person's life? I remember hearing of the death of Billy Walkabout in 2007 and after reading of his accomplishments in his relatively short life span, I was overwhelmed by the selfless sacrifices of this man, the courage he exemplified, and the neglected tributes that this brave man deserved during his time here on Earth. Perhaps if we have overlooked the tributes that this true American hero deserved while he was still alive, the least that we can do is remember him and honor his memory.

Please click on his name in the title of this entry to go to a website which provides more information about Billy Walkabout. Unfortunately, the official Arlington National Cemetery's website does not.

As a companion piece, here is a story published by NewsOK:

Published: March 11, 2007

MONTVILLE, Conn. (AP) _ Billy Walkabout, a native Cherokee whose actions in Vietnam made him among most decorated soldiers of the war, died March 7 in Connecticut.

He was 57.

Walkabout received the Distinguished Service Cross, Purple Heart, five Silver Stars and five Bronze Stars. He was believed to be the most decorated Native American soldier of the Vietnam War, according to U.S. Department of Defense reports.

Walkabout was born in Cherokee County, Okla., on March 31, 1949, and lived much of his life in Oklahoma.

At the time of his death, Walkabout and his wife, Juanita Medbury-Walkabout, lived in a portion of eastern Connecticut that is home to many Mashantucket Pequot, Mohegan and other Native American tribal members.

Walkabout's official cause of death was not given. The Native American Times reported on its Web site that he had been fighting complications of exposure to Agent Orange, a defoliant used by the military during the Vietnam conflict.

Walkabout, a Cherokee of the Blue Holley Clan, was an 18-year-old Army Ranger sergeant when he and 12 other soldiers were sent on an assassination mission behind enemy lines on Nov. 20, 1968, in a region southwest of Hue.

However, they ended up in the enemy's battalion area and came under fire for hours, during which he was seriously wounded. Several of the other 12 men were killed at the scene, while the rest later died of their injuries.

Walkabout's citation for the Distinguished Service Cross said he simultaneously returned fire, helped his comrades and boarded other injured soldiers onto evacuation helicopters.

''Although stunned and wounded by the blast, Sgt. Walkabout rushed from man to man administering first aid, bandaging one soldier's severe chest wound and reviving another soldier by heart massage,'' the citation states. ''Only when the casualties had been evacuated and friendly reinforcements had arrived, did he allow himself to be evacuated.''

He retired as a second lieutenant. In a 1986 interview with The Associated Press, Walkabout said his 23 months in Vietnam left him with disabling injuries and memories that refused to fade.

''War is not hell,'' Walkabout said. ''It's worse.''

He said he struggled with failed marriages, thoughts of suicide and years of self-isolation when he would spend six months at a time alone.

''Everyone I went to high school with thought I was dead for years. They're amazed when they see me and they say, 'You're not dead.''' Walkabout said.

He often refused to sleep near his wife, afraid he would strangle her in his sleep or try to push her under the bed to protect her from the bombs he imagined were going off.

Over the years, however, he found solace in the Native American powwows where he often was an honored guest, leading the traditional dances in time to the pounding drums and chant of the singers.

''I'm at peace with myself,'' Walkabout said in 1986. ''I've got my dignity and I've got my pride. ... I never lost the war in Vietnam, I never lost a day of it. Even when I was wounded, I didn't lose. When I fought, I won. I won my wars.''

Walkabout's family and friends tended a round-the-clock fire in Montville after his death on Wednesday and planned to extinguish it Sunday, part of a four-day Cherokee ceremony, family members said. The smoke fire is believed to carry prayers to heaven and spiritual messages from place to place around the world.

Lisa Bernier, Walkabout's stepdaughter, told The Day of New London newspaper that he was unpretentious when asked about his time in the military.

''I'd say 'thank you' to him, and he'd say, 'What for?' He was so humble,'' Bernier said.

Monday, August 30, 2010

Upcoming Powwow

The Nipmuck Indian Council of Chaubunagungamaug
Presents the 30th Annual

Nipmuck Pow Wow
September 11th and 12th
11:00 am to 5:00 pm
Lake Siog Park
Dug Hill Road
Holland MA
Traditional and Contemporary Foods
 Authentic Drumming and Dancing
Indian Crafts and Jewelry
Public Welcome
Admission:  Adults $2
Children 12 years old and under and Elders $1

Sunday, August 29, 2010

A further definition of the Red Road

"The Good Red Road" is a phrase used by many different Native American tribal communities to represent one who is walking the road of balance, living right and following the rules of the Creator.
One may be of any race or of almost any religion and walk the Red Road. The Good Red Road is a path, a way of living. It's full meaning is the way one acts, the methods one uses, and what directs one's doing. There is more to the Red Road than spoken word or written words on paper. It is behavior, attitude, a way of living, a way of "doing" with reverence - of walking strong yet softly, so as not to harm or disturb other life. The Red Road is a pathway to truth, peace and harmony.

Walking in balance is more than just the physical action, it also incompases the mental, emotional, and spiritual aspects of our being. In experiencing the Good Red Road, one learns the lessons of physical life, or of being human. This road runs South to North in the circle of the medicine wheel. After the graduation experience of death, one enters the Blue or Black Road, that is the world of the grandfathers and grandmothers. In spirit, one will continue to learn by counseling those remaining on the Good Red Road. The Blue Road of the spirit runs East to West. 

We must speak in one united voice to awaken the people of the world to the catastrophic consequences we face if we don't change the way we relate to each other and our Mother Earth.

Source: http://www.ontheredroad.com/

Strategies for 2011

I have pitched both 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' and 'The Killing Zone' to agents and publishers, generating some interest from a few agents both via mail correspondence and in-person interviews. I'm still trying to find that one agent or publisher who will understand the marketing potential of my novels. With the advent of many CSI-type shows on TV and with our society becoming more multiracial and beginning to understand the precarious ecological balance of our Mother Earth, I know that my writing of a mixed-blood sheriff involved in CSI investigations while solving mysteries and who experiences conflict within the modern world and his Native American traditions will resonate with a large group of readers.


My strategy is to finish the final draft of 'Montana Harvest' (chronologically, the first of the novels that I've written so far) by the end of September and then send it to my editor. I will review her corrections and recommendations, then finalize the manuscript by the end of this year and then in early 2011, self-publish that novel. Then while 'Montana Harvest' is available at Amazon.com, Borders, Walden Books, etc., I'll continue to pitch 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' and 'The Killing Zone' to traditional agents & publishers.

I plan to volunteer at a Red Feather straw bale house build on the Northern Cheyenne Indian reservation in Montana during June, 2011 and if all goes well, by then I will have three published novels available and will be working on the fourth novel, 'Secrets of the Bob Marshall Wilderness' which takes place prior to 'Montana Harvest' while Jim is a newly commissioned Montana Highway Patrolman. I plan to blog about my volunteer activities while in Montana and my intent is to make people aware of the hardships and neglect prevalent on today's Native American Indian reservations.

Seven Philosophies For a Native American Man

First Philosophy - TO THE WOMEN

The cycle of life for the woman is the baby, girl, woman, and grandmother. These are the four directions of life. She has been given by natural laws the ability to reproduce life. The most sacred of all things in life. Therefore, all men should treat her with dignity and respect. Never was it our way to harm her mentally or physically. Indian men were never abusers. We always treated our women with respect and understanding. So, from now on, I will treat women in a sacred manner. The Creator gave women the responsibility for bringing new life into the world. Life is sacred, so I will look upon women in a sacred manner. In our traditional ways, the woman is the foundation of the family. I will work with her to create a home atmosphere of respect, security and harmony. I will refrain from any form of emotional or physical abuse. If I have these feelings, I will talk to the Creator for guidance. I will treat all women as if they were my own female relatives. This I vow.

Second Philosophy - TO THE CHILDREN

As an eagle prepares its young to leave the nest with all the skills and knowledge it needs to participate in life, in the same manner so I will guide my children. I will use the culture to prepare them for life. The most important thing I can give to my children is my time. I will spend time with them in order to learn them and to listen to them. I will teach my children to pray, as well as the importance of respect. We are the caretakers of the children for the Creator. They are his children, not ours. I am proud of our Native language. I will learn it if
I can and help my children to learn it. In today’s world it is easy for the children to go astray, so I will work to provide positive alternatives for them. I will teach them the culture. I will encourage education. I will encourage sports. I will encourage them to talk with the Elders for guidance; but mostly, I will seek to be a role model myself. I make this commitment to my children so they will have courage and find guidance through traditional ways.

Third Philosophy - TO THE FAMILY

The Creator gave to us the family, which is the place where all teachings are handed down from the grandparent, to the parent, and to the child. The children’s behavior is a mirror of the parent’s behavior. Knowing this, I realize the importance for each Indian man to be responsible to the family in order to fulfill the need to build a strong and balanced family. By doing this, I will break the cycle of hurt and ensure the positive mental health of our children, even the children yet to be born. So, from now on, I will dedicate my priorities to rebuilding my family. I must never give up and leave my family only to the mother. I am accountable to restore the strength of my family. To do this, I will nurture our family’s spiritual, cultural and social health. I will demonstrate trust, respect, honor and discipline; but mostly I will be consistent in whatever I do with them. I will see that the grandparents and community Elders play a significant role in the education of my children. I realize that the male and female together are fundamental to our family life. I will listen to my mate’s council for our family’s benefit, as well as for the benefit of my Indian Nation.

Fourth Philosophy - TO THE COMMUNITY

The Indian community provides many things for the family. The most important is the sense of belonging; that is, to belong to “the people”, and to have a place to go. Our Indian communities need to be restored to health so the future generation will be guaranteed a place to go for culture, language and Indian socializing. In he community, the honor of one is the honor of all and the pain of one is the pain of all. I will work to strengthen recovery in all parts of my community. As an Indian man, I will give back to my community by donating my time and talents when I am able. I will cultivate friendships with other Indian men for mutual support and strength. I will consider the effects of our decisions on behalf of the next seven generations; in this way, our children and grandchildren will inherit healthy communities. I will care about those in my community so that the mind changes, alcohol and drugs, will vanish, and our communities will forever be free of violence. If each of us can do all these things, then others, will follow; ours will be a proud community.

Fifth Philosophy - THE EARTH

Our Mother Earth is the source of all life, whether it be plants, the two-legged, four-legged, winged ones or human beings. The Mother Earth is the greatest teacher, if we listen, observe and respect her. When we live in harmony with the Mother Earth, she will recycle the things we consume and make them available to our children. As an Indian man, I must teach my children how to care for the Earth so it is there for the future generations. So from now on, I realize the Earth is our Mother. I will treat her with honor and respect. I will honor the interconnectedness of all things and all forms of life. I will realize the Earth does not belong to us, but that we belong to the Earth. The natural law is the ultimate authority upon the lands and water. I will learn the knowledge and wisdom of the natural laws. I will pass this knowledge on to my children. The Mother Earth is a living entity that maintains life. I will speak out in a good way whenever I see someone abusing the Earth. Just as I would protect my own mother, so I will protect the Earth. I will ensure that the land, water, and air will be intact for my children and for my children’s children-the unborn.

Sixth Philosophy - TO THE CREATOR

As an Indian man, I realize we make no gains without the Great Spirit being in our lives. Neither I, nor anything I attempt to do, will work without our Creator. Being Indian and being spiritual has the same meaning. Spirituality is our gift from the Great One. This say, I vow to walk the Red Road. As an Indian man, I will return to the traditional and spiritual values which have guided my ancestors for the past generations. I will look with new eyes on the powers of our ceremonies and religious ways, for they are important to the very survival of our people. We have survived and are going to grow and flourish spiritually. We will fulfill our teachings and the purpose that the Creator has given us with dignity. Each day, I will pray and ask guidance. I will commit to walk the Red Road, or whatever the spiritual way is called in my own culture. If I am a Christian, I will be a good one. If I tradition, I will walk this road with dedication. If each of us can do these things then others will follow. From this day forward, I will reserve time and energy for spirituality, seeking to know the Creator’s will.

Seventh Philosophy - TO MYSELF

I will think about what kind of person I want to be when I am an Elder. I will start developing myself now to be this person. I will walk with the Great Spirit and the grandfathers at my side. I will develop myself to remain positive. I will develop a good mind. I will examine myself daily to see what I did good and what I need to improve. I will examine my strengths and weaknesses; then I will ask the Creator to guide me. I will develop a good mind. Each day, I will listen for the Creator’s voice in the wind. I will watch nature and ask to be shown a lesson which will occur on my path. I will seek our the guiding principles which guided my ancestors. I will walk in dignity, honor and humility, conducting myself as a warrior. I will seek the guidance of the Elders so that I may maintain the knowledge of culture, ceremonies and songs, and so that I may pass these on to future generations. I choose to do all these things myself, because no one else can do them for me. I know I CANNOT GIVE AWAY WHAT I DON’T HAVE, so I will need to learn to walk the talk.

Source: http://www.nativevillage.org/Inspiration-/seven_philosophies_for_the_nativ.htm

Jim's people - the Crow Tribe

Crow (trans., through French gens des corbeaux, of their own name, Absároke, crow, sparrow hawk, or bird people). A Siouan tribe forming part of the Hidatsa group, their separation from the Hidatsa having taken place, as Matthews (1894) believed, within the last 200 years. Hayden, following their tradition, placed it about 1776. According to this story it was the result of a factional dispute between two chiefs who were desperate men and nearly equal in the number of their followers. They were then residing on Missouri river, and one of the two bands which afterward became the Crows withdrew and migrated to the vicinity of the Rocky mountains, through which region they continued to rove until gathered on reservations. Since their separation from the Hidatsa their history has been similar to that of most tribes of the plains, one of perpetual war with the surrounding tribes, their chief enemies being the Siksika and the Dakota. At the time of the Lewis and Clark expedition (1804) they dwelt chiefly on Bighorn river; Brown (1817) located them on the Yellowstone and the east side of the Rocky mountains; Drake (1834) on the south branch of the Yellowstone, in lat. 46º long. 105º. Hayden (1862) wrote: "The country usually inhabited by the Crows is in and near the Rocky mountains, along the sources of Powder, Wind, and Bighorn rivers, on the south side of the Yellowstone, as far as Laramie fork on the Platte river. They are also often found on the west and north side of that river, as far as the source of the Musselshell and as low down as the mouth of the Yellowstone."


     According to Maximilian (1843) the tipis of the Crows were exactly like those of the Sioux, set up without any regular order, and on the poles, instead of scalps were small pieces of colored cloth, chiefly red, floating like streamers in the wind. The camp he visited swarmed with wolf like dogs. They were a wandering tribe of hunters, making no plantations except a few small patches of tobacco. They lived at that time in some 400 tents and are said to have possessed between 9,000 and 10,000 horses. Maximilian considered them the proudest of Indians, despising the whites; "they do not, however, kill them, but often plunder them." In stature and dress they corresponded with the Hidatsa, and were proud of their long hair. The women have been described as skilful in various kinds of work, and their shirts and dresses of bighorn leather, as well as there buffalo robes, embroidered and ornamented with dyed porcupine quills, as particularly handsome. The men made their weapons very well and with much taste, especially their large bows, covered with horn of the elk or bighorn and often with rattlesnake skin. The Crows have been described as extremely superstitious, very dissolute, and much given to unnatural practices; they are skilful horsemen, throwing themselves on one side in their attacks, as is done by many Asiatic tribes. Their dead were usually placed on stages elevated on poles in the prairie.


    The population was estimated by Lewis and Clark (1804) at 350 lodges and 3,500 individuals; in 1829 and 1834, at 4,500; Maximilian (1843) counted 400 tipis; Hayden (1862) said there were formerly about 800 lodges or families, in 1862 reduced to 460 lodges. Their number in 1890 was 2,287; in 1904, 1,826.

     The Crows have been officially classified as Mountain Crows and River Crows, the former so called because of their custom of hunting and roaming near the mountains away from Missouri river, the latter from the fact that they left the mountain section about 1859 and occupied the country along the river. There was no ethnic, linguistic, or other difference between them. The Mountain Crows numbered 2,700 in 1871 and the River Crows 1,400 (Pease in Ind. Aff. Rep., 420, 1871).


      Present aggregate population, 1,826.


     See Hayden, Ethnog. and Philol. Mo. Valley, 1862; Maximilian, Trav., 1843; Dorsey in 11th and 15th Reps. B. A. E., 1894, 1897; McGee in 15th Rep. B. A. E., 1897; Simms, Traditions of the Crows, 1903.

Source: http://crow.bz/main/people.htm

Sunday, August 22, 2010

What it means to 'Walk the Red Road'

I've used forms of the term 'Walk the Red Road' in this blog and in my novels and it is a common reference used by Native Americans to describe where they strive to be physically, emotionally, and spiritually. My character, Jim Buchanan always makes an attempt to follow 'The Red Road' but as it is with most behavior modification it is sometimes difficult to attain. Distractions always seem to compete with our goals but if we can take small steps just a day at a time, we can all get there. I found a good definition of 'Walk the Red Road' and here it is for you to read:



The Red Road

The Red Road is a term used frequently which means to live a traditional lifestyle: drug and alcohol free, respect for others, respect for yourself, respect for creation and to worship the Creator, Great Spirit, Great Mystery.

It means to be honest with yourself and others about who you are as one of the original common, wild and free peoples of this land.

It means to walk among mainstream America alert and aware of the fact that you are very different than they are ... and that is okay.

It means they will always try to make you the same as them because they are uncomfortable with your existence as an American Indian.

Always walk in a good way.

Let them be reminded of lies told, treaties broken and promises made but do all you can to heal yourself and others.

Keep your mind free and alert.

Stay away from drugs and alcohol.

Seek wisdom.

Attain peace in your heart and gift it to others in turmoil.

We have never been and cannot be what they are.

It's not in our blood.  Stay strong.

Stay alive and give our children a future of confidence and pride.

We find no answers in material possessions ... seek spiritual growth ... find contentment and walk in Creator's light.

- Anonymous

My New Writers Group

Last month I joined a newly formed writers group in Storrs, Connecticut. The group, composed of between five and ten members, is predicated upon the Iowa Writers Workshop concept; a popular technique for providing constructive feedback. My submissions for this writers group will be the chapters from Montana Harvest. Chapter 1 will be submitted this Wednesday, August 25th.

Thursday, August 19, 2010

Books, books, books

I met a dear friend for lunch today. In fact she was my companion at Manchester Community College's Mishi-maya-gat Spoken Word & Music Series in 2007 where we both gave readings to a captive audience. Our enjoyable lunch lasted from 1:00 until past 3:30. We spoke of where we are in our writing careers and our lives and made plans to organize a reunion gathering of our former teacher and our classmates. After lunch I went to Borders Books because I had a 33% off coupon and a $25 gift card that I won in a raffle at CAPA-U in May. My intent was to find books pertaining to either Native American Studies or Montana travel guides. My plan is to volunteer for a Red Feather build next summer. What I instead found myself drawn to was Native American Spirituality. I discovered the following books:

1 - 365 Days of Walking the Red Road by Terri Jean - a book of inspirational quotations
2 - Native American Wisdom by Kent Nerburn and Louise Mengelkoch - a book of random quotations
3 - The Wisdom of the Native Americans by Kent Nerburn - a book of words to live by
4 - Indian Spirit by Michael Oren Fitzgerald and Judith Fitzgerald - pictures of great Native Americans and their words
5 - Black Elk Speaks by John G. Neihardt - the premier Native American book widely hailed as a religious classic. Black Elk is considered a Holy Man of the Oglala Sioux.

I will take the best excerpts from these books and post them weekly to my blog. The quotes are classic, in-depth revelations of how we as a society should behave toward ourselves, toward other creatures in the world, and toward Mother Earth herself. For without wisdom, compassion, love, and understanding, what are we?

Monday, August 16, 2010

Linda Stevens - the fourth entry in the Jim Buchanan character series

You met Sheriff Jim Buchanan in May, Coroner Hank Kelly in June, and Deputy Rocky Salentino in July. Now meet Police Chief Linda Stevens.

Linda is 5’8” with short blond hair and an athletic build showcasing her 14% body fat. She is a Thompson Falls native, four years younger than her friends Jim and Kate. Linda idolized Jim's successes during her teenage years and decided to follow his professional path, studying Criminal Justice at the University of Montana. After college she applied for and achieved the highest ranking to date at the Montana Police Academy in Bozeman. Accepting a patrol officer position with the Thompson Falls Police Department in 1989 at the age of 23, Linda worked her way up the ranks until she was named Police Chief in 1997 at the age of 31. Linda is a solid, rock steady person in town and Jim’s honest link to the police department. Everything is by the book with her and it doesn't hurt that she holds simultaneous black belts in Karate, Aikido, Judo, and Jiu Jitsu as well as being a highly decorated law enforcement marksman.

Web Site Coming

I have begun the process of establishing my web site. I have the domain name 'felixgiordano.com' reserved and when I build my website and upload it, it will then become available via Internet searches and for website browsing. My manifested target date will be during mid-2011. I plan to utilize the site for my promotion as an author and will identify the novels in The Jim Buchanan Series, their progress, how and where readers will be able to purchase them, book reviews that I come across, plus book tours and signings. My primary plan is to secure an agent and a traditional publisher but an alternative path is to self-publish. Self-publishing has come a long way since questionable services such as AuthorHouse, Infinity Publishing, Xlibris, and IUniverse, ruled the landscape. Now highly recommended self-publishers such as CreateSpace (owned by Amazon.com) and Lulu are helping authors get published when the traditional routes become blocked due to various reasons not related to a particular author's talent. Stay tuned, I plan to update my progress on this venue. It will prove to be an exciting time.

Saturday, August 14, 2010

An indication of how serious I take my writing

The Jim Buchanan Novels by Felix Giordano - Series begins in 1992

Red indicates novels completed or currently working on

1) Secrets of the Bob Marshall Wilderness – rumor of a lost gold and silver mine brings together a group of people in search of untold riches. However, greed, a 19th century legend and an early winter storm lead to their downfall and it’s up to Montana Highway Patrolman Jim Buchanan to save them and put the pieces together. While doing so, Jim is seriously injured. (1992)

2) Straddling the Red Road – Jim recuperates from his injuries and spends time with his half-brother Bobby Twofavors and learns how both close and far he really is from the Red Road. While on the Crow Reservation, he becomes involved in opposing a pseudo-town’s desire to sell liquor to the Natives. (1992)

3) Sasquatch – Amid reports of a Bigfoot on the loose, the county is awash with developers trying to build a coal-fired power plant. Jim is asked to become involved in an investigation by Sheriff Dan McCoy when a number of construction workers are killed. The two men have to determine whether the murderous rampage was the result of a Bigfoot or the locals. (1993)

4) The Vanishing Tribe – the legend of a small tribe of Native Americans having magical powers and inhabiting a remote section of Northwestern Montana is related to Jim by Flathead Police Chief Jacob Stronghorse. Soon to be retiring Sheriff Dan McCoy calls them the Brigadoon Tribe. (1993)

5) Mission Mountain Mystery – around the same time that Jim wins election as Sanders County Sheriff and leaves the Highway Patrol, a rumor surfaces of a rabid Grizzly Bear on the loose terrorizing hunters and campers in the wilderness. Jim is persuaded by another county sheriff to help find the man-eater. (1994)

6) Cries from the Flathead Valley – alcoholism leads to the deaths of Flathead youth and an investigation uncovers that there is more to it than just kids drinking themselves to death. (1994)

7) Montana Harvest – series of corpses and unsolved murders leads Sheriff Jim Buchanan to break up an international human organ transplant conspiracy with Mayor/Doctor Hamilton Jackson as its head which ultimately leads to the death of Jim’s wife, the former Kate Nelson. (1995-96)

8) Mystery at Little Bitterroot – Jim and Elijah find a body on the Flathead Indian Reservation and Jim involves Police Chief Linda Stevens and County Coroner Hank Kelly in the investigation. Soon after, two Flathead youth die from alcohol poisoning and Jim begins to wonder if the body and the deaths of the boys are connected. (1996)

9) The Killing Zone – Two teenagers, one an artist and the other a musician, are hitchhiking from Minnesota to Los Angeles to seek fame and fortune. On the way they meet two Native American boys who give them a lift. When their car breaks down they run into a biker gang. One girl is murdered, one boy left for dead, the other girl kidnapped and the other boy is blamed for the carnage. Jim learns of the assault and gets involved when the gang kidnaps his daughter, Alma Twofavors. (1997)

10) The Scarlet Max – A rare red diamond is smuggled out of Australia by organized crime and transported to the United States. The diamond courier is murdered and the rock stolen in Las Vegas. Jim and his deputy, Rocky Salentino cross paths with the murderer in Vegas while attending an FBI seminar. A pursuit ensues across three states and the diamond eventually lost, or is it? (1998)

11) The Disappearance of Joshua Nelson – Jim is contacted by his former Chicago Bears defensive line coach to resume his pro career. Once the season begins, Jim’s teenage nephew, a budding minor league baseball prospect, disappears and foul play is suspected. Jim must decide which is more important, his career or rescuing the boy. (1999)

12) Great Lakes Mystery – The two Native American boys from 'The Killing Zone' travel to Minnesota to visit the girl they once met and after finding her stumble onto a mystery requiring Jim's help. (2000)

13) The White Buffalo – A white buffalo is born on the Crow Reservation which is a sign of prophecy for the Crow and a sign of envy to the white population in Billings. (2001)

14) September Mourn – Jim, Hank Kelly and his family are invited to New York for the wedding of Kate's cousin Karin. When her fiance dies in the WTC towers attack, Jim has to rescue Karin while Hank assists with the forensic investigation. (2001)

15) Enigma in the Pines – a college student on a summer tree planting expedition meets the specter of a young Native American girl in the pine forest and learns that she holds the key to a long lost secret that Jim must confront. (2002)

16) Badge on 42nd Street – Jim and Hank are invited back to New York due to their heroism in the WTC attacks. They inadvertently get involved in an investigation of missing homeless people. (2002)

17) Unidentified Corpse – a headless, handless, footless body is found near Flathead Lake coinciding with the escapes of two criminals that Jim helped place behind bars. Jim has to find the murderer and uncover the killer’s motive. (2003)

18) The Legacy of Dan McCoy – Dan McCoy is murdered and Jim has to find his killer and determine if it was a random act of violence or if there was criminal intent to murder Dan. (2004)

19) Justice for Little Hawk – Jim is accused of murdering a common drifter who is later found to be the only son of a very rich man. (2005)

20) Circumstances at Cold River Junction – in the midst of a raging snowstorm a group of college students become stranded and one dies in a suspicious manner. Jim and his daughter Alma, who is now an FBI agent, suspect that someone in the group is the killer and they have bring that person to justice and the rest of the group to safety. (2006)

21) Milwaukee Road – Jim is attacked by a fugitive from justice and dumped onto a freight train. When he regains consciousness, he discovers himself in Milwaukee and doesn’t remember who he is. He must learn who he is, get back to Montana and capture the criminal. (2007)

22) The Return of the Scarlet Max - Hawaiian honeymoon of Jim and retired Police Chief Linda Stevens is interrupted when she is abducted by organized crime who are still searching for the lost Scarlet Max diamond. (2008)

Memorable phrases by Police Chief Linda Stevens

“You stubborn Crow. We’re talking about your life here!”

“Cut the crap, I’ll knock your ass clear across the parking lot.”

“I found out there were no ballistics evidence on the two dead police officers.”

“We’re your friends Jim. Friends need to share not just the good times but the hardships as well.”

“Jim, I have a feeling this girl will not only send you to your grave, she’ll dig the hole for you too.”

Memorable phrases by Native American characters

Ex-con Flathead Member Willie Otaktay:

“There’s a serial killer on the loose. At last count, they’ve found about four or five carved up bodies on the reservation. You best watch yourself.”

“White men can’t track.”

“I grew up on this land. I hunted and fished in the wilderness since I was shoulder-high to my horse. I know this land like the earth on the floor of my grandfather’s tipi.”

"All of us on Mother Earth are cousins. When we all realize this there will be peace among all people,”

“What do you think I did during all that time I spent in prison? I read books.”


Crow Chief Soaring Eagle:

"Little Hawk, the beauty isn't in the beads on your neck, or the pipes we smoke, or the moccasins we wear. The beauty is in the hands that made them."

“You have always been Crow, in your heart and in your spirit ... go the way of the strong; but be wise Little Hawk.”


Flathead Tribal Member Elijah Littletree:

“This is sacred land. The white man killed my people on this ground and now they’ve done it again.”

“Whose government ... the white man’s government?”

“May Creator fill everyone’s lives with blessings and love for all things.”


Son of Elijah, Abraham Littletree:


“They stole the liquor. They thought if they drank it, they would see warriors in the buffalograss.”


Flathead Tribal Police Chief Jacob Stronghorse:

“Hey, you know what I want. We got three dead bodies on reservation land.”

“Pleasant words won’t stop a warrant. You need to decide what you’re going to do.”

“I can delay them with a few tricks. The white man’s law is full of loopholes.”



Flathead Tribal Member Miss Martin:


“Do you men have passports to visit Turtle Island?”


Acaraho Eaglefeather:

“If you’re going to Billings with me, put your flint knife in the trunk too. You’ll scare the white folk crazy carrying that thing around.”

"Éše'he ... Evoohta ... Taa'é-eše'he ... Enemene ... Enoohta.” (translation: "By the sun I will see you ... by the moon I will sing to you ... until I leave.”)


County Coroner Wisdom Redsky:

“You think all Natives are the same ... my people are Lakota not Crow.”

“Wakan Tanka, unshimalam ye oyate.” (translation: “Great Spirit, have mercy on me.”)

“Our brains are for thinking and sometimes worry too much about our age. Our hearts are for blood flow, let the love rush from your heart and follow where it leads you.”

Thursday, August 12, 2010

Memorable phrases by Retired Sheriff Dan McCoy and Coroner Hank Kelly



Retired Sheriff Dan McCoy:


“I love it so much that I told Hank everyone in Thompson Falls can kiss my ass.”

“Wow wee! Damn, they don’t hit like that in the NFL anymore.”

“Yeah, so what? Can’t a white man date a Flathead?”

“I’m giving away the shroud of Christ. Yep, I’ve done seen the face of the Lord. He spoketh to me and said tobacco juice is the elixir of Satan.”

“I’ll take the 8-ounce bacon-bison cheeseburger with French fries and a slice of Dutch apple pie.”

“Man, if you ain’t the most dense Indian I ever met.”

“Jim, there are things in this world worth dying for and that wasn’t one of them.”

“Don’t you dare tell a soul that Dan McCoy gets a massage.”



Coroner Hank Kelly:


“My friend might die, and you’re asking about the investigation? Didn’t Hoover teach you G-Men compassion?”

“The blood that settled and coagulated in his muscles makes him look darker.”

“He had some skin carved off his shoulder in addition to the missing head, hands, and feet. We think he may have had a tattoo. Whoever killed him, made damn sure he wouldn’t be identified.”

“That hole in the center; we found microscopic shards of leather. Someone may have used it as an ornament. Maybe they hung it from their neck.”

“This body has a gaping wound in his chest and most of his internal organs are missing. This looks like a cult killing.”

“I’m good at dissecting. Give me a shot at putting you back together.”

Memorable phrases by Sheriff Jim Buchanan

“They say Thompson Falls is halfway between Hope and Paradise.”

“My sister told me that our spirits were born in still water.”

“Old Man Coyote is a trickster. He takes many shapes. He lives among the Indians of the Plains.”

“I’ve got a hundred people pulling at me from all directions. Don’t piss me off.”

“She’s liable to tear each one of you apart. Then we won’t know if there were two, three, or four of you.”

“Well, there’s a bunch of dumb people out there too. On Wednesday I spied on a white supremacist meeting in the basement of the old church on West Street."

“I was riding on horseback over the Big Horn Mountains before I ever learned to drive a car.”

“The last time I felt the spirit of someone protecting us. I can’t say that today.”

“Think you’d find yourself in a proper frame of mind if you knew they ran a story about you on ‘60 Minutes’ while your ass was sitting on a cold bunk and they removed your belt and shoelaces so you didn’t hang yourself from a light fixture?”

“Blowing up the morgue is one thing but a federal conviction for multiple murders is a sure death sentence.

“Five minutes with those two, and all my problems will be cured.”

“Name’s Buchanan ... Jim Buchanan and I’m about ready to knock you and your gang into next year.”

“A twenty-five mile radius in Montana is like trying to single-out one dimple on a basketball.”

“No Martha. You stay put, this could get ugly.

“McCoy never screwed up this bad, eh?”

Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Progress on 'Montana Harvest'

I am now working on page 143 of double spaced copy. It is the beginning of Chapter 18 and Jim Buchanan is in such a predicament. His sister, Mary Whispers Twofavors is in the hospital recovering from liver transplant surgery, his niece, Alma Rose Twofavors is confused regarding who her parents really are, his wife, Kate Buchanan is in shock due to the fact that a talented musician, Alexis Sandoval whom she was chaperoning has vanished, and on top of that my antagonist (guess who) is about to reveal his Modus Operandi to an unsuspecting and trusting victim named Renee Chabert. At this rate I should finish the novel (it's about two thirds complete) by the end of September. It will then go to my editor for a professional edit and then I will resume making the edited suggestions for 'Mystery at Little Bitterroot' and 'The Killing Zone'. If all goes well I will have three novels ready for publication in early January.