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Wednesday, February 27, 2013

My First Paragraphs

Montana Harvest -

The thunderstorm continued to bully its way onto the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation. In an old two-room unheated cabin with tarpapered roof and a few plywood-covered windows, the extended Robinson family huddled in the lone bedroom. Sandy Robinson, an eighteen-year-old unwed mother of three held her oldest in her arms. Each crash of thunder caused the four year old to dig his fingers into her shoulders. The clasp of the chained locket around her neck loosened each time that he did.

Mystery at Little Bitterroot -

A long, inquisitive sniff, a lick, a bite, and then the hungry scavenger braced its hind legs. Tugging at her find and shaking her head, the coyote loosened the carcass from the riverbank. Behind her, the field of buffalograss, a shade of gold under the Montana sun, darkened as a weather front crept across the landscape.

The Killing Zone -

At 8:47 PM, Mick, dressed in blue jeans, a short sleeve t-shirt and a black leather jacket drew a long drag from his cigarette as he stood outside the liquor store with his friend Ray who shooed a moth that seemed interested in the overhead light above the door. A young, attractive woman, professionally dressed, walked up to them. Mick stepped out of the way.

Incident at Dead River Junction -

Parked on the breakdown lane of a lonely stretch of US Highway 228, just west of Taylor, sat a Montana Highway Patrol cruiser. Tired, anxious, and on the back end of a ten-hour shift, Officer McCoy stared at the sun as it continued its slow dive behind the Cabinet Mountain Range. Aroused by the intrusion of smoldering aspen riding on a crosscurrent summer breeze, he rolled down his window.

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